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1. I'm honored once again to have one of my books nominated for a Big Al's Books and Pals Readers' Choice Award. Tapped: Book Three of the Pipe Woman Chronicles is up for the award in the category of Fantasy this year. As the name of the award implies, there's a popular-vote component. Coincidentally, voting opened today -- and there are prizes in it for you! If you're reading these words, would you please click here and vote for my book? (Rafflecopter gets testy with Internet Explorer, so if you have another browser available, it's best to use that one.) A number of other nominated books -- many of them Rursday Reads -- are also worthy of your vote. I'd like to draw your attention in particular to Laurie Boris's Sliding Past Vertical, K.S. Brooks's Night Undone, Carol Wyer's Just Add Spice, D.V. Berkom's Yucatan Dead, and the Brooks/Hise/Mader humor pastiche called Bad Book. Consider giving them a little love while you're at it. Then come on back. I'll wait. And thanks!
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Now then. In advance of National Grammar Day, which is coming up on Tuesday, I offer you this post that I wrote for Indies Unlimited. I'm re-running it because the topic keeps coming up -- mainly, I suspect, because schools don't bother to teach this stuff any more. (Don't get me started.)
something I was going to write about for my Indies Unlimited post this week,” I
said to my daughter Kat. “Do you remember what it was?”
“Hmm. Maybe it
was punctuation in dialogue,” she said.
I said. “You were saying that your teachers never went over it in school.”
said. “We concentrated on learning the rules for writing essays, because that’s
what kids need to know to pass the state-mandated tests.”
“Which the kids need to do so the teachers can keep their jobs.”
there’s no dialogue in an essay.”
said. “So here’s how I think of it. Dialogue is a sentence inside a sentence.”
“I’m not sure
what you mean,” she said. “I think you’ll need to give some examples.”
“I was just
about to,” I replied. “Let’s use the phrase, ‘do you remember when.’”
asking a question, the question mark goes inside the quotes: Do you remember
when?” I said. “Same for an exclamation mark: I do remember when!”
“But what if
the sentence inside the quotes ends with a period?” she asked.
little trickier,” I said.
“I knew this
was going to get complicated,” she muttered.
“Nah, it’s not
that hard,” I said. “You just have to watch where your attribution is.”
said’ or ‘he said.’ If the attribution comes after the end of the sentence,
like I’m doing right now, then you replace the period at the end of the
sentence with a comma,” I explained. “And the comma stays inside the quotation
Then I said,
“But if the attribution comes first, like in this paragraph, then the sentence
inside the quotes gets a period at the end. And just like with the comma, the
period goes inside the quotes.”
“And if there’s
inside the quotes gets a period – like this.”
“And if,” I
said, “your attribution comes in the middle of a sentence, you need to put a
comma before the first close-quote mark.”
“I think I get
all that,” she said. “But it’s punctuating the attribution that seems to trip
up a lot of people.”
they’re not thinking of dialogue as a sentence within a sentence,” I said. “The
attribution frames the quote – it’s all one sentence. I’ve seen what you’re
talking about, too; they hang the ‘he said’ or ‘she said’ out there as a
this.” She said.
I said. “Or
like this. But it’s wrong. You need to use a comma to tie the quote and the
there are times when you can end a quote without tying it into the next
sentence.” She smirked at me.
smirk off your face, missy,” I said. “That second sentence of yours isn’t
attribution – it’s a stage direction!”
cried. “And now let’s talk about a pet peeve of mine, and it’s something I’ve
caught you doing.”
groaned, “I know where this is going.”
“See? See? You
just did it again!” she crowed. “There is no way you could have groaned through
that whole sentence!”
I hung my head
in shame. “You’re absolutely right,” I said. “I should have put a period after
‘groaned’. That’s another reason why ‘said’ is the safest verb to use for
attribution. It sure is a good thing you’re one of my beta readers, huh?”
"It's a good thing for you, yeah," she said, smirking.
(This post originally appeared at Indies Unlimited on September 13, 2013. Happy National Grammar Day!)
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